Let's See What You're Not - Comments

Yeah, I'm starting to think you hate Shim, and I'm a person who loads back luck on my characters, but never this much. You are starting to worry me :( Seriously, you're gonna make me cry here. And now I really wanna know what happened with his auntie, and why weren't Mark and Emma at school, and a bunch of other things! Grrr I love you for writing this but I hate you for writing this.

I'm sure that made perfect sense... to somebody.

OMGGGG arrrrgggggg!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't commented in a while but I meant to. Anyway, love the new chapters. I know that Shim would never rape anyone, and I hate that dude that starts with a C...(I'm horrible at names) Ugh, I want to jump into the story and kill him. Or at least help Shim somehow. Annnnnyway. Update soon please, I can't wait to see where this story is going because this is a really good twist so I have no idea how it fits. You've really got the suspense aspect down. Great work :P

ok no graphic details just write when he gets back home

Dude this story makes me wanna cry so bad!

it would also be helpful if u commented on 1 of my stories

maybe its time 4 mark to find out shims secret
go to his house
caleb lets slip
on street
or on peer

Great update, and the 'magical name' for it is a hockey puck haha(:
~Laren<3(:

how many more chapters until the end?

did he run away because his aunt molest him and his parents didn't believe him?

Yet another great chapter :) I absolutely loved Shim and smiled so wide when I saw this was updated. I hope he situates himself soon though. And I've also noticed about the slow update thing :(
Please update soon!

this story is awesome! the characters are so realstic
keep it up =]

OMGGGG this story is awesone! I'm in live with Shim an Mark is just adorable. I think the way you keep bringing up Shims homelessness makes it more realistic. In other stories I've read theyve had the guy not facing any difficulties or finding some random person to live with after about a day. I like how that isn't cliche. I also like how Mark is being slightly masochistic by liking Shim, but you can tell that it's because he sees some type of promise in Shim where he knows he won't do anything extreme. Please update this soon because it's really good. It made me smile at times and at other times it made me feel complete sympathy for the characters and that's really hard to do.

this story is awesome :D but poor shim :( i wanna hug him so bad

Good chapter made me wanna hug Shim again

Oh poor Shim!
I really want someone to find out and help him.

I love how they're so close to each other but...not.
I want them to get closer!

another awesome chapter, and your'e welcome

im loving this its great and for some reason i wanna give poor Shim a hug : )

update sooon pleAASE! =p

Oh my gosh I missed a chapter! I missed commenting on a chapter! I'm so disappointed right now.

I love that you used the word complicatedness. That's awesome.

I really want them both to have a proper conversation, or for mark and emma to find out that shim lives on the streets.
I just want some happiness! I've read so many angsty fics lately. Will there be some happiness soon?