Let's See What You're Not - Comments

I miss this story so much!

This is one of my favorite stories, so I'm glad you updated again.
I wish Shim and Mark would talk it out! They are so good for each other. Though, his room mates make me nervous. Hope they don't go too far in screwing with him.

i can finally read it now! xD i love your chapters and stories, really realistic. and yeah that's exactly what i meant, you portrayed it right x] you know, i'd love to write a shit long comment right now, but little time and so much to catch up on and little will for anything xP

I wish shim would speak to Mark :( he's so stubborn! Hopefully shim wi sort things out soon and they can be together.
And do we like Kent or not? Because he seems nice but I get a bad vibe from him... Ahhh I'll c

Haha what? You really think I'd be disappointed by this story? Silly child...
Well I'm just happy that it's going somewhere :) I wish I was still bothering to write my stories. I'm disappointed in myself...

YAY YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYYYYYYY
I hope shim likes mark too :((((

Yay! I missed Mark, it feels like I haven't seen him in forever, what with Shim avoiding him, and skipping his chapter. I really liked in the beginning because I feel like we don't really see enough of Emma. I love seeing them interact and seeing more of zEmma's personality. She's such a sweet girl, even though she can be fiery.

The thing with his father was really cute. It's nice that Mark's opening up to him. But for some reason I really didn't like when he said "I can't believe you'd do that, Mark." I don't know, it just seemed like he was condemning him when Mark already felt bad. I still love him though <333.

This chapter seemed kind of short, but I feel it building up to something big, and it's something. It's not a paragraph, so that's good for everyone else.

Awwwz thanks for calling me awesomes! I think I'm pretty cool myself, well, just a little.

i loved this chapter x3 cuz of Shim's awesome thoughts haha deep and well i can completely relate to them, not that that's really important. i did really like the chapter though. i'm glad you're back x]

and i do read the chapter titles, cuz they're interesting. lyrics, i'm guessing? i don't know the band or anything but the characters in this story are awesome xD

Lol I think I'm more *le read*. Occasionally I read the title, but I don't really recognize the song it comes from, so I just move on.
XD well now you just owe us a Mark chapter then, maybe two in a row to balance it out. Sorry you had to update under such morbid circumstances.
Shim was really opinionated in this chapter - it took me a bit offguard. I don't think he's ready to realize he has emotions. The fucker nearly died and he acts like that's some trophy to be won. And he clearly needs to realize his feelings forr Mark.

This is one of my favorite stories, so I'm glad you updated again.
These room mates make me nervous. Hope they don't go too far in screwing with him. And I wish he and mark would talk it out!
I kinda don't usually read chapter titles, which makes me feel guilty now that you mention it because you probably put thought into them. Sorry, I'll try harder!
Please update soon!

Yay! This reminds me that I should probably update my own stories....Oh well.

Anyways, awwwwz I love you Shim. I really want Aunt Jenny to DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That AKLDFA;DLAI (ignore me) I really loved the two guys that Shim shares a room with even though they're evil. I just thought they were kind of funny (ok, I'm sick and twisted...) But really, I love that it's not all flowers and butterflies once he gets to the home. I have to say this is one of the most realistic stories that I've read on Mibba. Shim is such a real character, and he's no Mary Sue. And then Mark is so genuine and nice. Awwww, I love them all. (except the EVIL ones)

Response to your authors note: I'm probably going to go stalk your new story just so you know...and I don't care about the length, its something! After I was starved of Mark and Shim I don't care if you only wrote a paragraph as long as I get more of them.

I think that this chapter fit with the other ones, but I also haven't reread this in a while. I usually just read the last couple of sentences in the chapter before when I don't remember what happened. I thought I was the only one who did that with their characters! Glad to know I'm not alone.

Of course I'm mad at Shim. You obviously have nothing to do with the way his mind works!

Oh and for the titles I usually just skip over them...I do that for every story I read though. I just feel like chapter titles don't often add to content so I skip them, if you think it contributes to the story I will start to read them!

I will never lose interest in this. This is the only story that I consistently comment on, even though I love a lot of other stories. I just feel a lot more connected to these characters and it's really well written. It's funny because the other day I was looking through my old contests and realized I had subscribed to this as a prize. It just doesn't seem like that and I'm really glad you won my contest because otherwise I never would've found this!

Sorry for writing you my life story lol, it might be a little incoherent because I'm high off this story.

I love this!!!! please update soon!!!!

Hey hey hey! I really miss this story and I hope you update soon. I'm dying to know how Shim reacts to the home and the tension between him and Mark must be relieved!

I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!! ok... The story is so beyond epic it's awesomely impossible, but I love that song!

GAHLJLKAKGHSDKLJDGKJSHDGHJKDLGHSJKAH

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!

And omg Shim fucking jumped off the pier?! He needs more help than I thought, the poor thing. Aww, things are gonna get better for him soon.

Geez, don't tell the world they become serial murderers - you just gave away their secret. Now they''ll go to prison.

Dammit shim Mark will only ever love you! Why doesn't he see that? And no miss this update didn't dissapoint:)

This chapter was good, but I feel like the second half was mostly dialouge. Also it was a little fast-paced. I did love Mark's father though. He's so caring and nice, most other people wouldn't care about Shim as much as he does and that really makes his character.

I don't really understand why you don't want help Shim! Although I get it's a pride thing. But you shouldn't jump off the peir just because you're being offered a better life!! MAN UP (Sorry little rant at Shim there.) Yeah, I kind of understand the Shim thing, but it doesn't make that much sense.

Anyways great chapter! I got so excited when I was notified of the update, this huge smile spread across my face. :D Update soon!

G'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW POOR SHIM! POOR MARK! OHMYGODILOVETHISSTORY!

Ohmygod Shim what the fuck is wrong with you?! Why'd you get mad at him? All he did was love you... with his mouth! Ugh, they just took like five hundred steps back after becoming so close!

Yesh, I love your story :) I had that same reaction when I saw my story linked in someone's signature and I'm like "huh that sounds familiar... OHMYGOD that's MY story!" I felt special :D

No! It can't stop there!Now I have to wait for an update. ...I just started reading this today and now I'm addicted.

I love this chapter so much, but I had a tiny stab of hate towards Mark when he kissed him. I love him, but he pissed me off. Poor Shim. He trusted Mark to be normal with him :( I kinda teared up when he was crying and then again when he ran out of the room. I think this was one of your better chapters because it was just so filled with emotions.