haha jimmy is like sooo xcited in this chapter its hilarious it made me giggle xD and haha i love the ending when jimmy says fuck yah avenged kids are gonna take over cali! xD i almost fell over laughing
28 weeks (what Leana is at), isn't bad, but she should probably wait until the baby is closer to full term (36 weeks) before giving birth, because size isn't a huge issue, development is and the fetus is still fine tuning everything internally at this point and actually shouldn't be bulking up weight until 36-40 weeks.
I do like this chapter though, although you once again had a little bit of issues with your vs you're.
Hopefully the baby won't come two months early. If the baby is that big, it's possible the due date is wrong; otherwise, no matter the size, the baby isn't ready to come two months early and will face time in the NICU until the lungs are ready to work, etc. I'd have the doctor re-check the date of her last period, time of conception, etc., and make sure it's all correct.
Going to be interesting to see what Jimmy does with a baby =)
Awwwww of course the present would be appreciated Owen, it's Jimmy, he's not a troll or materialistic! A gift from the heart is the way to go :D i loved this, it was adorable. I feel bad for Harvey, poor guy. Owens mum is a bitch, seriously. more soon please and thank you :D
Nawwwww bath time for Jimmy. That was sweet of Leana to wash his back too XD *Has to agree with Callused Silk up there* ^^^^ Can't understand anything he screams XD I loved this, can't wait for more :D
lol i love this chapter an dang i would hate to live in a neighborhood like that if i did they would probly all hate me in a matter of seconds lol and aww how nice of leanna to scrub jimmy's back for him lol and the quote u said u found was hilarious xD
It's good that Jimmy is so protective over his son. I thought it was amusing, too, that he hates the neighborhood he lives in =). It'll be interesting to see if Jimmy ever meets his old flame and to see what he'd say to her; I bet it won't be veyr nice.
*pets Jimmy* I find it funny that you'd have him make the comment about understanding what the singer says, because I have so much trouble understanding Matt Sanders during the Sounding of the Seventh Trumpet era. xD
kjsbfvgljwrg totally forgot about the pregnancy XD explains it. I'm so glad Jimmy and him get on :D And wow did his mom blow up or what. Crazy bitch lol. I love how Leana buys cake and Jimmy's like "i dont know how a womans mind works" lol. everyone loves cake :D Loved the update! More soon please and thank you :D
All parents react in the heat of the moment (as we all do, I think), so I don't think she meant to hurt him. But the fact stands that she did. And he's right, he is old enough to make his own decisions and if he's mature enough to find his dad, he's mature to know about him and meet him. I think it's wrong of her to have kept Jimmy from Owen for so many years; naming her child Owen means she's got fewer regrets than she thinks.
Hormones will do that to you and I feel bad for Owen. Also, be careful with a few things. You had a couple errors, but one of them I think was just typing too quickly 'lsot' instead of 'lost'. You then confused 'you're' with 'your', but I really am enjoying this story and I'm definitely looking forward to some more Jimmy and Owen interaction.