again i loved the update and i think the letter was a clever way to go about it haha and jimmy better write back to Owen i hope they meet in person soon though
I love scheming teenagers, lol! Some teenagers really do have access to information they wouldn't otherwise, and I'm curious to see what Damon does with things. Hopefully he's not just leading Owen on and going to use him or lead him astray.
It's always fun helping your friends move. *sarcasm*
I think I know why this chapter was here; it's meant to set things in motion for future chapters. I liked the commentary about helping Brian moved, but where did he move to? We got the rooms and such, but I think a bit more detail would be good int his chapter.
Fuck yess!!! I love "A Little Piece of Heaven"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One of the best songs ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad Damon knows how to hack computers because I think Owen would have a lot of trouble getting some details on The Rev. It seems like the people in Owen's neighborhood are stuck up bitches who need a few shots of JD and Vodka and a good lay!! *huffs*
Anywhoo!! This is a good chapter!! And I totally approve of the next chapter being in Owen's POV!! I can't wait to read it!! But until then... ^_^
P.S.: Let me kill Richard in "We're Young And In Love"! Please!!
poor Jimmy getting poked in the eye by the mean 3 year old (I've haven't had the pleasure of being poked in the eye by a 3 year old but I did get poked in the eye by a 1 year old. hurt like hell) yay! Brian is gonna help Jimmy look for Owen (even though he is right down the street). now the wait for the next chapter *sits still for a minute* *flails* I need it now!! but I can wait "patiently" for it *sits and taps fingers against leg* can't wait! :D
Awww poor Jim-Jim got poked in the eye >< That shit hurts when it happens lol. I hope Owen finds him soon :D Or vise-versa. I love this story!! :D More soon please and thank you ^^
YESSSS!!!!!!! *le fist pump* I'm sooo glad Syn is help Rev find his kid!! Especially when he lives on the sames street as Owen!!! I love little Mackenize!!! *laughs*
Anywhoo!! This is an excellent chapter!! I can't wait to read in Owen's POV!!!! But until then... ^_^
I like this story but why his mom gotta be so strict about everything Do u kno how happy ANY parent would be if their kid had ALL A's like she is stupid N I think they should find each other I think it would be nice for Owen to find his father(even if the wicked witch he calls his mother doesn't want him to) n that Jimmy should find his kid Can't wait for he update!!!!
Awwww yay, he's getting a cd :D I see his mum shitting bricks if she catches him listening to it. That bitch is crazy lol. I freaking love this story and i can't wait for more :D
YAY i totally knew i was gonna love this chapter and i was right i did =D and hm i wonder how Owen is gonna like the cd when he listens to jimmy's band cant wait for the next chapter hurry PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE
I think Violent Ecstasy took my comment right out of my mind!! I fuck!! She was okay in opinion before but now she has gone waaaayyyy to fucking far with the no CDs allowed. However, I'm fucking ecstatic that both Owen and The Rev are looking for each at the same time. It's just that one is gonna have a lot more trouble looking for the other.
Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!!! The characters page is looking good for the beginning of the story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! But until then... ^_^
wait wait wait. he's not allowed any CDs? :O that's fucking blasphemy!! why doesn't his mom let him get any? it's not like it's gonna effect his schooling (which she's waaaaaay too strike about) gahh I'm disliking his mom more and more >.<