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  • SaraHorlyk

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    I love this update! :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 05:38pm
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    again i loved the update and i think the letter was a clever way to go about it haha and jimmy better write back to Owen i hope they meet in person soon though
    November 19th, 2011 at 05:01pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Approved. :D
    I love this story.
    I love how he just hacks the info XD
    More soon please and thank you :D
    November 14th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    totally loved it and i approve of the next chapter being in owens pov and haha damons a hacker thats totally awesome dude! xD
    November 13th, 2011 at 05:58am
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    I love scheming teenagers, lol! Some teenagers really do have access to information they wouldn't otherwise, and I'm curious to see what Damon does with things. Hopefully he's not just leading Owen on and going to use him or lead him astray.
    November 13th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • Aightball

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    It's always fun helping your friends move. *sarcasm*

    I think I know why this chapter was here; it's meant to set things in motion for future chapters. I liked the commentary about helping Brian moved, but where did he move to? We got the rooms and such, but I think a bit more detail would be good int his chapter.
    November 13th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • SpencerG

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    Fuck yess!!! I love "A Little Piece of Heaven"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One of the best songs ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'm glad Damon knows how to hack computers because I think Owen would have a lot of trouble getting some details on The Rev.
    It seems like the people in Owen's neighborhood are stuck up bitches who need a few shots of JD and Vodka and a good lay!! *huffs*

    Anywhoo!! This is a good chapter!! And I totally approve of the next chapter being in Owen's POV!! I can't wait to read it!! But until then... ^_^

    P.S.: Let me kill Richard in "We're Young And In Love"! Please!!
    November 12th, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • babygurl94512

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    I'm so glad he has a friend that hacks computers now he can find his dad quicker (pssst he is down the street!!)
    November 12th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I can't wait 'till Owen & Jimmy is meeting each other :D
    -I can't wait to next update :D

    And i don't mind either if the next chapet is in Owen's P.O.V.
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    I like Damon. he can hack computers lol. I don't care if you do the next chapter in Owen's POV again :)
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:35pm
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    LOVE IT and hmm i hope jimmy finds out soon who his son is i want to see what shit goes down xD
    November 12th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • yaitssarawr

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    Aww. I loving this story :) please write more!
    November 12th, 2011 at 01:24am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    poor Jimmy getting poked in the eye by the mean 3 year old (I've haven't had the pleasure of being poked in the eye by a 3 year old but I did get poked in the eye by a 1 year old. hurt like hell)
    yay! Brian is gonna help Jimmy look for Owen (even though he is right down the street).
    now the wait for the next chapter *sits still for a minute* *flails* I need it now!! but I can wait "patiently" for it *sits and taps fingers against leg* can't wait! :D
    November 12th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Awww poor Jim-Jim got poked in the eye ><
    That shit hurts when it happens lol.
    I hope Owen finds him soon :D
    Or vise-versa.
    I love this story!! :D
    More soon please and thank you ^^
    November 12th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • SpencerG

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    YESSSS!!!!!!! *le fist pump* I'm sooo glad Syn is help Rev find his kid!! Especially when he lives on the sames street as Owen!!!
    I love little Mackenize!!! *laughs*

    Anywhoo!! This is an excellent chapter!! I can't wait to read in Owen's POV!!!! But until then... ^_^
    November 11th, 2011 at 06:58pm
  • babygurl94512

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    I like this story but why his mom gotta be so strict about everything
    Do u kno how happy ANY parent would be if their kid had ALL A's like she is stupid
    N I think they should find each other I think it would be nice for Owen to find his father(even if the wicked witch he calls his mother doesn't want him to) n that Jimmy should find his kid
    Can't wait for he update!!!!
    November 11th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Awwww yay, he's getting a cd :D
    I see his mum shitting bricks if she catches him listening to it.
    That bitch is crazy lol.
    I freaking love this story and i can't wait for more :D
    November 7th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    YAY i totally knew i was gonna love this chapter and i was right i did =D and hm i wonder how Owen is gonna like the cd when he listens to jimmy's band cant wait for the next chapter hurry PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE
    November 7th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • SpencerG

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    I think Violent Ecstasy took my comment right out of my mind!! I fuck!! She was okay in opinion before but now she has gone waaaayyyy to fucking far with the no CDs allowed.
    However, I'm fucking ecstatic that both Owen and The Rev are looking for each at the same time. It's just that one is gonna have a lot more trouble looking for the other.

    Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!!! The characters page is looking good for the beginning of the story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! But until then... ^_^
    November 6th, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    wait wait wait. he's not allowed any CDs? :O that's fucking blasphemy!! why doesn't his mom let him get any? it's not like it's gonna effect his schooling (which she's waaaaaay too strike about) gahh I'm disliking his mom more and more >.<
    November 6th, 2011 at 06:12pm