In a Heartbeat - Comments

Grr, Matt's an asshole! And I was so glad that Zachary was the one they found!
And I'm really sad this is coming to an end... I love this story and I loved the update :) great job!

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WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!
YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!!

OK, so I've just started reading this and I'm already hooked! Brian's a cutie pie, and such a sweet guy- and I'm sure Matt's lovely. I cannot wait to read the rest of this!

Well they were caught by exactly who I thought it was. Zachary is a lifesaver. And Matthew only continues to make me more and more sick to my stomach. I hate how he treated Brian! Though I guess it's not uncommon for someone of his status, but still. I just want to slap him. But I am happy that they're going to make love. They need that one night just in case her plan doesn't work. Loved the update! Just a little bummed it's almost over.

This is amazing. You should make a sequeal. I hope Brian gets Eva and that everything goes as planned.

they are so going to get caught

Chapter 22: Oh no!!! AHHH!!! AND NOW I'M CAUGHT UP??? NOOOOOOO!!! I NEED MORE!!!!! To say that I love your story would be an understatement. It is seriously soooooo good and I love it so much! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! (the dress is beautiful, by the way) :)

Chapter 21: I found myself shaking my head when Eva thought that she would be safe once she was married to Matthew. I feel so bad for the characters sometimes. We know things that they don't, things that would help them so much if they knew. Oh well, onto the next chapter! :)

Finally got a chance to read this again. On chapter twenty and LASIFHLASASLDFJHALSDFHAOFH!! That is how I feel about Matthew right now. He is the biggest dirt bag of life!!!! Can he go die now? Must read on!!

Just read all of this and I like it :D
So Matthew needs to drop dead like now lol and Evangeline needs to stop thinking about him when she has Brian who is sweet and caring.

Well the little trip to the beach was incredibly sweet. Have I told you that I freaking love Brian in this? Because I do, so very much. XD He's just the sweetest, and now I'm worried that they've been caught. A small part of me is hoping that he ran into a friend though and that it's all good. And her dress is gorgeous! :D Great update!

Aw, Johnny asking for Evangeline's help was really cute. But I didn't like Matt agreeing with his father's suggestion to kill her... I hope he doesn't do that, and I also hope she makes up her mind with who she prefers to stay with. Loved the last updates :D

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WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh in case you need it Andi is short for Andrianna.
that's my full first name. Ummmmmmm yeah. dakfjl;jksdl;fak;sdf
SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!
I love how I'm being paired with Johnny! kasjlkd;fjasd XDDDDDDDDDDD
love the chapter and love the story since I've last read it. (I got behind due to crap going on) it is amazing and i hope everything works out. Also....Matt....*cocks gun* you got a second head start....

I think it's cute that Jonathan came to ask for her help to marry the girl he loves. And I know this isn't terribly important, but would he even be allowed to marry Andi since he's a priest or does he plan on stepping down from the position? It's kind of bugging me, and I'm probably the only one who cares, but I'm just curious. Anyway, I hope her plan works! I don't really want Matthew to be able to go through with the assassination plan. Loved the update! :D

this is a fantastic read thusfar!!

Wow...I didn't see that one coming! I can't believe Matt would agree to have Evangeline killed. Grr...
can't wait to read more :)

This chapter just made me not like Matt. >< I could deal with him thinking of her as just being the wife and not a ruler or anything. That's what was expected during that time period. But now he wants to have her killed? Just because he doesn't want her in the way basically? Asshole. Now I'm hoping that something does happen to ruin the wedding, or at least the assasinatiom plan found out. Now I'm really anxious. Great update though! :D

Oh my gosh, Matthew is such an asshole! I can't believe this, can't wait to see what's next :)

whaaat??? OMG!!! Matthews true colors is coming out and have her killed after the wedding because she doesn't want to rule like him?? damn!! Brian needs to think of something fast!!

Hello there! I've read all of the chapters and I somehow like this story. The best is of course the last one. When Matthew saved Evangeline on chapter fourteen, I was rather pissed, both at Matthew and Evangeline. Evangeline was because she said that perhaps Matthew was better for her just because he was able to protect her. I was like what is the true love in that to someone who desires true love?? But I'm glad you explained her feelings later in the next chapter. Anyway, I loved the last part because Brian showed what he was capable of doing. I just love the fact that he had a natural talent with swords and saved Evangeline just like that.

I hate the king. Hoho. I know he was just thinking about his people but still, could he not care about his daughter's feelings more? Oh, and I love the part when, wait, let me search for it......................................... “Evangeline,” he growled as the soldiers took formation around my mare. I looked down at him, wishing the day when he was no longer in charge would come soon so I could truly look down upon him. on chapter 13. That sure was hilarious. And before I forgot to mention, I really like the different plot where Brian was only a quarter royal blood. I had expected that Brian was a prince who left his kingdom. But he was not. I like surprises. (y) There is also another part that I really laughed out loud. The one when Zachary told Brian that he brought Evangeline to the bathroom. I do not know why but I found it really funny.

The part when Evangeline was kidnapped, I honestly guessed that the people weren't Tyronian knights but Brian and his friends trying to take the princess away. I know, what the hell moment. But anyway it turned out to be the real Tyronians.

About the characters.. I have to say that I do not like Evangeline. I don't know why but I don't like her. But then again, I find princesses (in stories) are always annoying. :p I love James the best because he was always the side character and usually characters that pop anytime needed in stories are ones I adore. He seems like the character who does care but does not let it bother him, like a calm type. And I simply love that. Oh, and by the way, Brian and Matthew are fitting to their respective characters. I could practically imagine them acting while reading the story.

There are some, I assume, typing errors but I do know it will be fixed after a thorough check of the story. :)

It was a fun read, I hope you'll update soon! :D