In a Heartbeat - Comments

Eeeeek!!!! Words cannot describe how much I love this story!! I want them to run away and have adorable little babies together <3 I cannot wait to see how the rest of this plays out. I eagerly await more chapters :)

I'm so glad that Brian could defeat those bandits! And Evangeline admitted she loves him! That made me so happy :)
I really hope things work out well for the two of them.
Loved the update :D

wooah bandits?? but Brian saved the day *phew*!!!! aawe how will this end?? O_o
hope you're better now

It's almost over? Sad day. But anyway, this chapter was so cute! I agree with Synful Shadows, I just love Brian and Evangeline together. I really really really hope they end up together! Loved the update and I'm sorry you were sick!

Knew it wasn't Matt! :P Sorry, I get excited when I'm right haha. But Brian's got skill! Heck yeah, and now he doesn't have to let the whole Matt's saving her thing bother him anymore. And the ending was so sweet. I seriously just love Brian and Evangeline together, and I'm dying to know if and how they'll end up together for good. I'll just settle for the little "I love you" exchange for now though. :) Loved the update! Kind of bummed it'll be ending soon though.

Finally got back around to reading this and glad I did. I was concerned that Evangeline was so willing to have Matthew killed. It's like yes, I know you don't want to marry him, but does that justify having him killed? I was glad to find out that it was all just a dream though :)
And I seriously love Father Jonathon. He always seems to know the right thing to say :) Update soon please!!! <3

I liked the running away suggestion, even though Evangeline was too scared to actually try it. It just seems like the only way for them to be together. Poor Brian. :( And who the heck is that that showed up? D: I'd say Matt, but I have a feeling you might go with someone completely unexpected like a soldier from the Tyronian (I think that's the right one) kingdom or something else unexpected. Loved the update! :D

I bet it's Matt's voice :/ and if it is, I'm not sure if I'll like the next chapter...
Amazing update :D

aawe kinda cute idea James had, but uuuh.. shit who the heck was it that came??? O_o

Is it bad that I want the voice to be Matt's? Yeah, it's bad. Haha. I want Brian and Eva to be happy and run away together, but I just don't see that happening. Eva is too obedient of her father. But I'm sure everything will work out! At least, I hope it will...anywho, lovely job on this chapter dear. Keep up the good work :D

I reaaaally love the creativity of the story line! You're writing is simply wonderful and the setting and idea of this... wow! I really haven't read a story like this yet, it's really unique and different to most of the fan fictions out there. I love it, I really do :) Keep writing this! I wanna see hat happens next :D

*phew* it was just a dream would be so bad if she really made that deal, to kill matthew just so that she could be happy.. but she's right about brian being the better choice since she wants to change the kingdom for the better.. matthew threats the servants like shit..

*phew* it was just a dream would be so bad if she really made that deal, to kill matthew just so that she could be happy.. but she's right about brian being the better choice since she wants to change the kingdom for the better.. matthew threats the servants like shit..

I'm fully caught up now, and I'm suprisingly happy that the last chapter was just a dream. That wouldn't have made for much of a suspensful ending, but it was interesting to watch Evangeline consider that option. I can't wait to find out if/how she gets out of her marriage to Matthew now. Thank you for continuing your writing of this story, it really is amazing!

Loved it

It was just a dream! I really didn't see that coming. Although I'm happy Matt doesn't have to die, I really do feel sorry for Evangeline because I can see how much she wants to be with Brian instead. I can't wait to see what she does to make that happen.

Anyway, I loved it! Update again soon :D

Oh, I was relieved to know that is was nothing more but a dream! I wouldn't like if she had taken that decision to cut Matt out of the picture like that.
And I'm really excited as to what's going to happen next!
Great update :D

Well that's a relief to know that it was just a dream. I was really worried about what she was doing. Should've known you wouldn't do it that way. I think that talk with Jonathan will help her, at least let her be patient and see how it works out. I'm more than curious to see how it will. Great update! :D

I love this story!! I found it a little while ago but only just read past the summary now. May I say, as much as everyone else seems to dislike the last chapter, i really like it as its made me more interested. The thought of Evangeline being cunning enough to make a deal with her kingdoms rivals behind her fathers back is excellent!! I'm excited to see what happens. Whether all goes to plan or not, I can see both out comes making a brilliant climax to the story. Well done. I cannot wait for more!

No, no! That plan doesn't sound good to me...
And I don't want the kingdoms to be in war, especially Matt's kingdom. I think she isn't making the right decision by signing that contract :/
I just hope it doesn't backfire on her, too, like the comments below...
Great update! :)