This is really well written. Your description is beautiful and I love your word choices. c: It's all really amazing. The summary will gets you hooked and I like how you made the fairy tale your own with really nice and creative changes. For some reason, I just really liked how you described the queen. She's a bitch, yes, but you did an awesome job on her character. I can't really find anything wrong with the story. It was all done so well and it shows that you put a lot of thought and time into this. Simply awesome. <3
November 21st, 2012 at 09:37pm