Fairest - Comments

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I am happy I found this! Everything seems fine, there's really nothing I think you need to changer other than, maybe a update? =) I love the layout, some peoples layouts are kind of messy and don't really mix well. I usually don't care for it but I liked it so mcuh it encouraged me to read more. I found this story really interesting and I don't usually go for fairytale sort of stories but I'm eager to read more.

Ok so I found you through comment swap. I think i got the better end of the deal. I've stated ho I love the satire and the play on every thing, So i guess it wont hurt to say it again. I just now realized that it had to be 200 characters so sorry for spamming you with comments. But hey I like it. I really want to read more of this epic story.
I like the humor and the adaptation of classic tales spun into a new light!

Like I said Li love it. If you make any more I will deffinnetly read them.
Its good and funny and it doesnt drag on and on!

I enjoy all the references! also I love the quirkiness of it.
I'd love to read more!

This is cute and will definitely attract fans of fairy tales ;) You seem to have a loyal fan base too, good for you! Best of luck! Also, your intro was what really got me into the story, it's quirky and a little silly. It's like satire, or making fun of itself hahaha Your portrayal of Snow White is also fun to read =p like an angsty teenager with too much work to do and not enough help

Comment swap brought me here and Im so totally glad it did. I love fairy tales so I was excited to begin reading this. I like your idea and how you collaborated it with Snow White. Im definitely subscribing to this. <3

This is definitely an interesting take on the fairytale. The narration is fantastic - it's made me laugh several times, and the opening paragraph is very attention-grabbing. Likewise, your description is wonderful.

I love how you've adapted Snow White, and I'll be interested to see how/if you include other aspects of the fairytale.

Comment swap sent me here, but your intro caught my attention, I really enjoyed your writing its detailed and clear and your ideas are very original. this is now on my read list for here. i loved how you turn snow white into a more modern women instead of that weak lady who always needs to be saved. Thanks for a great read. :)

Okay, so Comment Swap brought me here, but your writing made me stay! It-This-You-Brilliant!! I love the spin on Snow White! It's wonderfully done, and while I hope you don't add too much romancy stuff, I think I can appreciate it wiith the style of your writing!

Another thing that caught me by surprise was the Once Upon a Time thing you threw in at the beginning, and the way you've connected all the chapters and everything. It's just so brilliantly written!

I'm a total sucker for fairytales rendition so when I realized that this was loosely intertwined with Snow White, I got a little excited. I think it's seriously just a creative and original concept that you've come up with, the whole "fairest" and Snow White, seriously, you deserve all the praise for just coming up with the idea. :3

Just a little thing, in the summary it says "and when her best friend asks for help" it shouldn't be a period after instead, but a comma because otherwise it doesn't make sense.

Enticing summary, though!

I thought that the little once upon a time thing was actually really clever at the beginning, haha, I even learned something new! Again with the whole fairytale feel to this, perfect beginning. c:

Totally love the trouble bit too, I was grinning so much at the "could you do me a favour?" because that is so true! I legitemately love how clever this is! I totally love Snow already even in the first few sentences of her introduction because she was totally not sleeping. And the bitch thing at the end, perfect. :3

I'll admit I'm not an avid reader of more fantasy stories but this one has definitely caught me eye. The beginning was a wonderful introduction and I am totally excited to read on and find out more about the prince Robin and Snow's adventures trying to break up the wedding, haha. Fairest doesn't seem to be a job of all peaches and cream. xD

Defintiely subscribing, this is awesome! <3

I love everything about it! The layout is also very pretty, by the way. It really goes with your plot. Speaking of your plot, it is very interesting! It's new and I like it. You took an old fairy tale and put a twist - something that has been done before. With a twist as interesting and the way you put it in words, you are doing a good job! :D Keep it up!

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It’s not your typical Snow story. I like how in your story Snow White is an office worker and not the typical fair lady waiting to be saved. The Evil queen is her boss or her mother? I can’t believe her brother is getting married O.o especially to a Tyenese

I really love this story! Your writing style is so interesting. It keeps the story interesting. I especially liked the way you did the intro in the first chapter. The layout is truly beautiful. It fits perfectly along with the story. Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad. Even though its only two chapters in, I'm pretty addicted.

First of all I love the layout, it's so classy and fits in with the story theme so well!
This is possibly my favourite redone Fairytale out on Mibba.
The story is so descriptive making it easy to follow.
I love this! Well done! I can't wait to see what you do next!

This story is off to a great start! I've seen tons of re-done fairy tales before, but this one is really unique and different. Your writing style is very descriptive and easy to follow. There is few if any grammar mistakes, and I love love LOVE the word choice. Only two chapters in and I forget I'm reading a story and just get lost in it all. I love your adaptation of Snow White, you're a very talented writer and I can't wait to see what you do next!

Lovely story so far. The layout fits perfectly with the story. I only noticed one or two spelling errors in chapter two. Not the type of stories I like to read, but this is pretty good so far. It keeps you wondering. You are a pretty good writer. Keep up the amazing work. :)

Comment swap brought me here! Anyway, this story is really good! You write in a way that's both interesting and easy to follow. You have very good grammar, which is a thing I look for in stories. So, I might be back, it's so good!

Hmmm this is cool. Your writing style is neat and easy to read, haha..I was wondering if this is like a Snow White story , or is the girls name just Snow White, I don't know ..BUt yeah like i said it's a really good writing form, and i really loved the intro..

Ahhh, I love this story. It is so witty and funny, but your attention to detail is amazing. I can't wait for another update. I am so hooked!