Victim - Comments

I can't wait to read more of this story :D

I really like this story. I like how you're developing the plot. In my opinion, I LOVE that you're developing the whoe story at a slow yet intriguing pace. Not rushing into her falling in love all of the sudden. I think it's great. & it's really cool to see Brian vs Matt. Hahahaha! I was not expecting that. But I'm sure it's gonna be pretty interesting.

Hope you update soon.

@ xMandiblesx
OMG REALLY?!?!?!!?! Tell me what's it about!!! Post soon, please, I LOVE read Syn fics - even more than Matt's!!! *-*

@ synful_desires
Aww well thanks for believing in me! It really means a lot. I'm starting a new story too that features Synyster. It's really different and I'm excited. I'll let you know when it's posted.

@ xMandiblesx
Yayyyyy!!! Can't wait to it!!! :D Don't know why you think your writing isn't good, you always let everybody hanging on the next chapter that is going to be update. ;)

@ synful_desires
Hahaha maybe and maybe not about the dinner! =D I may put a bit of fun into the story soon and some definite sparks maybe between her and Matt for ya!

For one moment I thought she'd manage to get away from the house and was like "*o*", but she failed. :/ It'd have a bit of action if she did and I bet Shadow reaction towards Rev would be like hurricanes meeting tsunamis ! OMG Is Matt going to take Keri for a dinner???? A romantic one??? OMG update soon!

@ Mari_Raven
Yeah I'm sure eventually she might trust him, but you never know lol. If I were in her shoes, I'd trust him LOL. He's too sexy not to trust lmao.

@ gothique4
Hehe yeah lol I like Jimmy in this story especially. I just love Jimmy all around. He looks like he would be an awesome best friend to have. =D

@ RosiePosie08
Thanks! I'm happy you like it!

@ emawamaborg
Thanks! I am glad that you like it. His dimples are amazing as is he lol. ^_^

Awww its so cute how she liked his dimples.
I really like this story!! Please update more!!!

Love this.

Awww she got to see his dimples :-)

I wouldn't want to be in Jimmy's shoes if Keri had managed to escape - Matt would have probably had his head. I wonder where he's planning on taking her....

Excited to see this update! It was great, I wish that she would just let him do what he has to do to protect her, yet I know she's acting like that because she doesn't trust him. Update soon, I wanna know where he's taking her.

Excited to see this update! It was great, I wish that she would just let him do what he has to do to protect her, yet I know she's acting like that because she doesn't trust him. Update soon, I wanna know where he's taking her.

Yay :3 I'm glad you updated and now I can't wait for another update! C:

and perhaps...if Shads is nice to keri,she'll warm up to him,and who knows...they could end up living happy ever after

and perhaps...if Shads is nice to keri,she'll warm up to him,and who knows...they could end up living happy ever after

love the update!!! can't wait to read more :)