Victim - Comments

Awesome update! Sucks she can't remember anything though

definitely liking this story so Far.

It sucks that she cant remember all of what happened, and I have a feeling that her questions wont stop until she figures it all out, Matt better prepare himself lol awesome update hon! =)

Love the update and can so get how freaked out she is if she can't remember what happened to her. I'm wondering how much of her memory she's lost and if she remembers meeting Matt at all

So you have a crazy mind as well, huh? Hahahahaahaha I can relate to Keri in some things as well, like she likes to read a lot, and in the 2nd chapter when she say it, I was like, "Yeah that's my girl!"LOL I prefer the simple characters than all those crazy bitches, you know? Makes the story more real when the character is not perfect like some writers wants to put it. I like to ramble, that's it! LOL Don't mention it hun, when I like one story I want to say what I think about it, I know the writer appreciates it cause she spend her time writing stuff for us to read, is the simple I can do.

@ synful_desires
Hahaha yeah! One thing I like about this story specifically is because some of the way Keri is, is how I am. Normally I just make female characters different and make up their personality, but I decided to try adding a bit of myself to her this time. It's easier to write that way when you can be yourself plus it just works this this particular story. LOL yeah that part with the belt cracked me up too. Glad I made you laugh. Thanks for leaving such a detailed comment too. I appreciate all comments I get, but I really enjoy when people take the time to tell me what they liked about it. =D

With a baby on the way, the updates are going to be very slow, she'll need to focus on the baby and won't have time for nothing, but I'm happy for her, send my best to her and the baby. :D But, on the other hand, I'm sad! D: I'm so caught up on this fic!!!

I already want more, this is turning out to be very good

Keri is a funny character I might add. The way her mind wander to odd thoughts like "make their genitalia into a belt"? I laughed hard at that! Matt is very intimidating, I like that too! ^^In all the fics I've been reading none has put Jimmy as a bad guy, and thats good, cause I really can't see him being bad and beating the shit out of some poor girl, he's just too adorable for that. One thing I like in this fic is that you write a lot, you don't make short chapters like some I've read. I'm excited to the next chapter, and I'm pretty sure Keri will put some of a fight when she find out who Shadows is, is going to be funny, can't wait!!!!

@ Synyster Gates;
Thank you! =D
I should shell out another update tomarrow hopefully.

@ synful_desires
Oh yeah! I really love that story too. I'm waiting on my co write partner to update. It's her turn and currently she's pregnant and about to have the baby. She already had the idea in her head, it's just writing it out. I can't wait for it myself lol. Still have good ideas for that story.

Oh my! Loved the update more please!!!

"I Give You My Soul", I love this fic to death, and it's so good written!!!! OMG really?!?! I'm gonna read it now!!! YAAAAAYYY

@ synful_desires
Which one of my other fics? and I'm about to post the next chapter of Victim within the next ten minutes!

You got that right!!!! I can easily stop anything I'm doing just to seat in front of my laptop and spend hours reading fics about them!!! BTW, what about your other fic? I miss it!!!!

@ synful_desires
Hahaha yeah I really doubt Avenged Sevenfold stories will ever get old. The guys are just too amazing and addicting. =D

And I just can't stop reading about them, oh my Gosh!!!!!! ROTFL

I really like this

@ gothique4
Thank you for the comment Madame! Yeah I've never written a Vampire Fic before so I'm pretty stoked about this one. I'm trying to do something different than just the cliche Vampire stories! I can't wait to write more of it myself lol.

@ synful_desires
Thanks so much for your comment! Matt and Brian are awesome lol. I just can't stop writing about them. =P