Victim - Comments

@ xMandiblesx
I didn't think it sucked at all darling, in fact, it was one of the greatest you've written; you gave a chance to Matt show to Keri that he's willing to improve his relationship with her - and that was too cute to deny it! *-* And I can tell they're going to be great lovers with those tempers of them! ^^

@ synful_desires
Well I'm glad you liked it. I felt this last chapter sucked LOL. But I'm working on the next chapter as we speak and I think it will redeem the last one. =D
Thanks for commenting! The story is finally getting to the good parts soon.

Rev - I can't even... I laugh so much of his childish antics, and Shadsy? That was very funny. I must admit to it's hard not to laugh when Keri is all angry and stuff, she just a funny little thing!!! LOL I'm drooling with Matt's cuteness! *_* He's just to adorable in his own way, I can feel now that the upcoming chapters are going to be very good with a lot of actions parts - can't wait to Syn to make his appearance! *_* - and Matt trying and falling hard to be nice with Keri, it's going to be awesome I can tell!

@ xo.Shadows Synner.xo
Aww I'm glad someone commented finally. I was pretty afraid that chapter wreaked. Not sure if it sucked overall or if I'm just in a funky unsatisfied mood. I was happy with all my other chapters, just thought this one was boring. I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for commenting.

@ synful_desires
Haha well I'm glad you enjoyed it love! I love and miss Jimmy and I try to include him in ever Avenged story. It just doesn't seem right not to use him.

Phew! I really thought he was going to do something to her! Im surprised that he actually held back though, I guess he really cares for her and wants to show her that, which is good =). I hope she gives him a chance to fix things and start over, as long as Shadows tries to control his temper I really think they can work =)

OMG! Jimmy dancing "Thriller" and food war? - I surely didn't see this coming! My mind were running with crazy ideas about what were going to happen in the kitchen, but not this! Haha I loved it, it was very funny and I laughed like a crazy psycho! I can see Jimmy like this - all crazy, dancing like he has no cares in the world while cooking, I bet he was like that in real life, minus cooking, I'm sure he didn't cook. Ok, Shadows ways to show his "attraction" to Keri is very peculiar, how he expect to Keri be nice to him when he's so uptight? He could have enjoyed the dance and the food war as well, not cut the fun like that. I don't think Matt is going to rape Keri, he's not like that I hope so; but then again he's so bipolar that I don't know what he'll do next, he's becoming an ass and I want Syn to cut his fun as well! LOL But I have this feeling that now is going to happen- Matt is going to bite Keri. I'm pretty sure that's what's going to happen. ^^

cant wait for the update!!!!

This chapter omg, it wasn't expected but I loved it! :) my favorite part would hands down has to be when they're having the food fight. Then Shadows comes in pissed and Rev's just like "We were just making some pancakes. Want some?" Fucking genius!

As far as the shower situation...hmm I'm not sure what to think. You always seem to surprise us with what's to come. I am rather excited my dear. I cannot wait until you update again!

<3

The beginning with Jimmy was very fun to read. I can see that happening with Jimmy.
Hopefully Matt will quit being an asshole to her soon.
You have to update soon with the way you ended it! Please?

I think he'll give up trying to get with her or... he'll start trying to smooth talk her and convince her that he likes her and so on :) Hehe, update soon!

Ok The Rev dancing around to thriller, and singing while making pancakes, like literally I could picture Jimmy doing that exact thing, so hilarious. But for as to what matt did kinda pissed me off, like that asshole. I think he might stop thought you know, out of the goodness of his heart,

A part of it will make me laugh? I was laughing almost the entire time! that was great! =D I can totally see Jimmy dancing to some mj while cooking and picturing him covered in flour? priceless.

"We were just making some pancakes. Want some?" JUST my ass haha.

And now the ending... HOW COULD YOU END IT THAT WAY? lol. I wanna know what he does next! update right MEOW, lady! =P I feel that maybe he'll stop... idk though, I'm not good at guessing lol.

I don't really know why but I love this paragraph: "Meanwhile in a very remote, hidden spot in the woods, there's a lair. A lair that is underground and built into a cave. The cave system goes on for several miles and it's the perfect location for evil and dark creatures to reside. It's a dwelling place for two men who harbor the most vile intentions for the human race. One of those men's name is, Synyster Gates. He and his right hand man, Vengeance, call this lair home." like there's just something about it.. excites me for when they come into it! ^_^ I think I might take the bad guys side in this story lol.

I'm really excited for more of this! it's getting better and better by each chapter and I'm really liking the feel to the whole thing.
Update for us soon, love!<3

@ xMandiblesx
I hope is a good thing when you giggle! LOL I'm glad to know you're not giving up on Victim, I just hate it when I find a great fic to read - which is rarely - and the writer just stop posting it. I know that writing is a dificult challenge and sometimes you have writer's block, but it makes me really upset when they just stop posting it and don't give an explanation. ^^ You're mean, that's the ugly truth, now you left me here all bothered guessing what just might have happened in the godamn kitchen! You better uptade today, miss!! Yes I am that bossy! LOL

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@ xMandiblesx
I do. :)

I really like this story so far! It's really good! I like how you're writing it too

@ synful_desires
Well first of all, lol! Your comments always make me giggle. Secondly, I don't plan on giving up this story at all! I want to keep updating until I actually finish it so don't worry! I do like to keep people guessing. Hehe I'm sure what you think in the kitchen will totally not be what it turns out to be but you never know. ;) I'll try to update very soon, possibly tomorrow night so I won't keep you and everyone else in suspense.

@ synful_vengenz
Hey thanks Doll. Yeah lol I like to keep people guessing sometimes but usually when I leave it at a cliff hanger chapter, I try to update quick so I don't leave people reeling too long. Sometimes I find it difficult to write because when I get inspired for my stories, it's usually by one specific grand scene I thought up in my head for later in the story.

So it's like....I get the beginning chapters easily in my mind and then the middle part of the story, I just have to work hard to think the parts in between up. Also sometimes I feel like I repeat myself by the words I use so I spend longer trying to use a various array of vocabulary. Heh I just wrote a lot.....anyways thanks for the comments hun!

@ RosiePosie08
Aww thanks! Glad to know that you love it! =D