Victim - Comments

I'm seriously loving this. I had a feeling at the start of the chapter when she was going on about vampire novels that Matt would be a vampire :-)

Ooh, I wonder what happened to make him hate Syn so much...

Looking forward to reading more :-)

A Matt/Brian vampire fic?!?!!? I'm so subscribing it!!!!!! I loved it so far!

@ xMandiblesx
YES!

@ Mari_Raven
Awww thanks deary! I'm really glad that you are enjoying it. I've REALLY missed writing. All my life I've been depressed off and on and have had a lot of anxiety for no reason, but writing has become my outlet. I'm going to try to update this again either later tonight or tomarrow. =D

This is getting too good, I totally need to get some hot cocoa reading this lol Update soon this is already turning out to be wonderful.

Is Matt a vampire?Love this story :)

Poor Keri :(

I think her part is written out pretty good as well.

Can't wait until she wakes up and is like "where the hell am I? then freaks out when she see's Shads haha.

Pointed out part: Some kind of invisible force trying to prevent her from having a relationship? Nope, just M. Shadows lol.

Im loving this hon, I cant wait for more! =)

Let me just say that I am already loving this. And I have faith that you will keep me loving it because your writing is just that damn good, Doll.

As far as you being concerned that you were writing it out too soft for Matt, I don't think so. It has its softness to it (which is good) but its also kind of like an obsessive attraction to her so I don't think its anything to worry about, I think it will work out quite well because its a nice mix in my opinion. I think it was written well and I can't wait to read from her point of view.

Pointed out part: I loved where Matt was at the counter and talking about his dimples, it was so great. You nailed it! I can totally see him saying something like that.

It seems very interesting so far and I am looking forward to what you have in mind for this story. I hope that you update soon because I would like to see what happens next between Keri and Matt.

I like it so far, I can't wait to see what to see how the two of them interact!

Yay first comment!I like this so far.Keri could of at least said thank you to Matt. :D