Victim - Comments

Love this.

Aww thanks for the shout out! I'm glad my comments make you smile super big! I really cannot wait to find out what's going on between Shads and Syn and the back story. I have a feeling that this story is going to be full of mind fucks, suspense and cliff hangers! Such as how you ended Keri's pov. However I am really excited for.this story. <3 love your stories keep up the amazing work

Awwww You really put a huge smile on my face after I read the shout outs! *-* Thank you so much! <3

I need to confess that Matt telling Amy that Keri likes Hello kitty's pajamas made my heart melt and a silly smile split in two on my face - that was just too cute to deny it. But you are too mean!!! How dare you stop right when Keri enters in the kitchen!?!? What did she witnessed??? I wonder that what she saw was Matt or one of the guys drinking blood... You left me really curious about that fight between Brian and Matt, can't wait to know what happened in the past that brought out this hostility between them. As ever you wrote a great chapter and I need to admit I was afraid you had gave up on writing to Victim. Haha xoxoxo

@ xo.Shadows Synner.xo
Aww thanks hun! For once a story of mine actually excites me again after everything that has happened in my life recently. Glad you are enjoying the story. =)

Something definitely snapped in Matt when Amy intervened. I dont think he really meant to hurt Keri he just got really angry and of course took it out on her because she was just there. Ive got a feeling that there is a lot more to his story and that Syn and Vengeance are a big part of it, I just wonder what all happened. I cant wait to find out, hon, awesome update! =)

@ synful_vengenz
Awww you're so sweet. Thanks! =D

@ xMandiblesx
I enjoy the fact that this one is dark like 'My Fucking Nightmare' but the detailing just pulls you in and you can visualize it like you're there. :) can't wait!

@ synful_vengenz
Thanks! I was updating it almost every day then got busy with work and then got writer's block! =O
I'm actually re reading the story to try and get in the mood to write an update right now lol.

In love with this story already, the details make it enticing. Can't wait to read more!!!

@ xMandiblesx
LOL You're forgiven because I must admit: In all those fics that the girls not fall in love with Matt or Brian instantly, Im like, "What the actual fuck?!?! It's Brian/Matt we're talking about!" I'm a fangirl for myself, that's why I live here! XD I hope you explain better her profile in the future chapters, and yeah, please introduce our chubby man and sexy kinky man! ;)

@ synful_desires
Haha yeah. Matt needs to cool his jets cause he's definitely not going to win her over by being hot headed all the time. Of course he's probably still stewing over the fact that she hasn't just instantly fallen for him like all girls have in the past. Sigh. I'd probably melt and die if I met him in real life lol. That'd be fine with me though, I'd die happy. (sorry fan girl moment)

Anyhow, Amy might become valuable in the story. Hehe pretty soon I'll be getting into explaning Syn and Vengeance's characters.

I think this Amy girl is going to be very helpful for Keri, I mean, obviously she'll spend a long deal at Shadows house around 3 men, so having a nice girl (aparently) to talk trough is good. She must be a vampire as well... I think was Shadows, because he's the only one she hates at the moment, now I wonder why he's so mad because now Keri wasn't rude to him.. oO Matt needs to understand that is not easy for anybody wake up in a strange place around strange people - and one that has been stalking her - he needs to cool out and let her punch him - I'm sure won't do him bad. Hahaha

I think Shadows kicked in the door, Shadow's sister is Amy...maybe? And she seems nice!

Hmm, from the description Amy sounds like she could be Shadows' sister.

I had to laugh at the guys sniggering behind Shadows' back for getting turned down sound often :-)

Ooh, I don't think kicking down the bathroom door is going to win her over, you big dumb ox :p

Amy is Shads awesome sister haah. I think Shadows barges in :))

i totally suck at banners. but here :)

http://www.polyvore.com/victim/set?id=61669408#stream_box

Ooo an angry Shadows. (;

This is seriously like medicine for me, Doll. Both chapters I've read today have honestly helped me forget the troubles and have put me at ease, I wish there was enough for me to read until the sun came up.

Part pointed out: "I notice the other two men look at Shadows and chuckle slightly under their breaths. What they find funny at a time like this, I'll never know." That is exactly how the two of them would've reacted lol.

@ A7Xknifemaster
Hahaha I'm sorry hun. I'm working on updating as we speak! I <3 Jimmy. ^_^

This is rather vivid for me... which is really good right now because I can get Lost in it and right now I really need to be Lost in a story instead of being in reality and dealing with all this bullcrap.

I'm glad Jimmy was through most of this chapter.

Oh and YAY, I got a shout out! haha.

...By the way, I'll be waiting very impatiently for the next chapter. =P Why did you have to end it there?! lol.

@ SevenfoldGirl_
Hey thanks for the commnt! Yeah hopefully her memory will come back over time.