Victim - Comments

The way you describe Rev... *-* Oh my, I want to put him in my lap and rock him back and forth until he's asleep - But still he's a lady killer. LOL In each chapter I'm growing fonder of Matt, he can be a vampire, has a temper and all but still he has some common sense - he doesn't want to harm any human and that's so thoughtful of him, but I wonder if Amy one day will grow tired of Keri and attack her or something since she's jealous of the human being - it'd be cool if Keri knows about the vampire thing from Amy, you know, she one day loose it and get all wild and crazy and do something stupid and end up telling Keri or want to attack her. Haha

The blood donation centre is a pretty crafty way for the vamps to get their blood supply, and it saves on them killing people. Ooh, so Rev's a bit of a wild one. I had to snigger a bit about Shadows saying that he doesn't think that human pussy is better than vampire pussy. One of them will have to remind him about that next time he's salivating over Keri lol.

Ooh, Jason fucked up. I have a tingly feeling that the important client is Syn but I'm not so sure on the other hand if Shadows would want to send him blood.

Omg 2 updates!!!! Finally we know the reason Syn is after Shadows. Major dun dun dun! I have to say I'm glad that Shadows didn't take advantage of Keri in the shower. And he did try and explain things to her, but I dont blame her for freaking out. Now I am interested to see how this all plays out. Gah! Great job!x

Ooh wow Syn is really a bad guy in this isn't he? I'm guessing that shit is just gonna get even more messed up for Keri now that he knows she's still alive

@ xMandiblesx
Oh so I guess this 'My Fucking Nightmare" is based on Jimmy? I never read a fic based on him it's only Brian and Matt... ^^ Haha, but I'll give a try, I need to read different things. I'm not judging, I do understand what she's passing, she going to be a mother, that's a huge challenge, I wish her my bests, but I secretly hope that she could sneak in some of 'the diapers change' time and update it!!! LOL

THAT'S WHY I LOVE YOUR FICS!!! ROTFL I only read fics that involves Matt or Brian kidnapping some lucky lady. I'd love if one day Brian would stomp at my house, claim me to my dad and take me away... Oh Gosh I'd be so happy that I could die, but of course I'd put a little of a fight for him not to think I'm that easy! ;) LOL

@ xMandiblesx
Lol holy crap dont mind me that was my ditzy moment lol, im still getting used to see my middle name in stories lmao! I cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve! =)

Holy Sheep Shit. That's fucking crazy, I cannot wait until the next chapter.

@ synful_desires
Awww thanks again dear! Yes I have other fics. A lot of people like the "My Fucking Nightmare" one. It was my first story on here and it's also about a girl being kidnapped but it's much more in your face at first. I'm having a problem finishing that one right now though because the guy later in the story I had planned, he actually died in real life so it's too painful to use him as a character.

I REALLY love the story I give you my soul. I'm getting impatient waiting on her to update but she has a lot going on right now sooo it's understandable. I think it's funny though how all my stories involve the female character being captured by the guys lol. I'm trying to write different stuff but I keep coming back to that. I'd secretly love to be kidnapped by Avenged Sevenfold. Who wouldn't? lol

@ xo.Shadows Synner.xo
Lol well I didn't know if you would notice but in the beginning of the story, I reffered to Keri's bestfriend's name to be Nicole.
So possibly this "girl" is Nicole muwahaha.

;) Guess you'll have to see what happens with her character later on. I know you will love it. Also evil Valary just felt right lol.

Ok! Take your time but not too much time, huh?!?!? LOL Just kidding. I know writing involves a lot of concentration and a mind full of ideas, it's not easy, and we all want good chapters to read, right? ;) Aww sweetie, don't mention it, seriously, I like your fics, like I said before you don't make the girls look weak and head over heels for any of the boys in the first sight and that's a plus! ;) Not to mention that I just started reading your fics because of "I Give You My Soul", you and your friend are doing a great job, you have no idea, I am so caught up in that story too. For now I have a lot of fics to read that I can't even handle it, but after I finish some of the fics I'm reading, I'll read the other works of yours, you have other fics, right?

Syn's POV!!! Im so excited to read things from his side after this chapter, im dying to know how Michelle's death is Shadows fault and just how Syn plans to make him pay =). Val is a beast holy shit lol, im actually a little scared of her after this chapter lol. Im interested to see how Syn will you the girl to his advantage, more than likely to be a mole im guessing, who knows he may even fall for her eventually ;-) lol.

@ synful_desires
Hehe you'll have to wait and see my dear. I shall try to update soon. So glad that you are enjoying my story! Your comments motivate me to keep writing. =D Thanks for believing in me.

@ xMandiblesx
What you mean with that???? Oh gosh, I have butterflies in my stomach of just thinking of what will happen next!!!! Why did Matt kill Michelle? I'm so curious! And I can feel that this friend of Keri will be a trouble. A lot of emotions is going to happen.

@ synful_desires
Hehehe glad you liked it! I felt it was time to shed some light on some un answered questions indeed.

Well in the next chapter I'll explain some on how Keri managed to call her friend so don't worry. Muwaha just wait until the Halloween Masquerade Dance chapter. >=)

A chapter based on Syn's pov - are you trying to kill me?!?! OMG, so much information I got from this chapter, I loved it! Matt killed the love of Syn's life - that's explain a deal to me - before I didn't get why in Hell he wanted Keri's death so badly but now everything makes sense! I wonder if during the chapters Val and Matt will fall in love again and Syn'll fall in love with Keri too - imagine that?!?! How Keri managed to phone her friend? oO I loved it and I am so excited to the next one, you have no idea!!!

@ synful_desires
Hahaha okay okay! Like ten minutes at the most I swear!

@ xMandiblesx
OMG!!! I am so excited!!!!!! I love the idea of Brian as a vampire! *-* I won't get out of here until you update!!!!! Hurry up!!!! LOL

@ synful_desires
Yeah well all four of them won't be in the same room until a few more chapters, however you will get to see how Syn and V behaves on their own time here in just a minute. I'm nearly done with the chapter. At the end, you'll see how everything gets dangerous. Especially for Keri!

@ xMandiblesx
So put all your excitement on the next chapter cause I'm dying to read it!!!! :D I'm so curious how you're gonna make Syn/Zack/Matt an Keri be all in the same room!!!

@ synful_desires
Haha awww thanks! You are too sweet! ^_^
That is true! They are gonna get it on extra good LOL. YAY I'M EVEN EXCITED