Fear Itself - Comments

I really love this story and I love how frequent your updates are! (Something I admire seeing as I'm notorious for abandoning schedules...)
Your writing is very detailed, you capture atmosphere and emotion very well and everything flows nicely. :)
My only criticism would be the odd spelling mistake or missing word but that's easily fixed. What are editors are for, right?
I'm excited to read more! :)

@ xXLoveForEternityXx
Thank you! I'll try to keep updating promptly, haha. I'm glad you like it!

*Comment Swap*
I've actually been keeping track of this story so the comment swap is really only pushing me to comment on a story I've already read! :)
I find that it's deeply interesting and quite unique. In summation to the entire story, I like your writing style. I find that it flows easily and makes it easy for me to get into each chapter as they come.
The layout is nice and simple, so it doesn't take away from the focus of the story and there are barely any errors that I've seen.
I'm looking forward to reading more :) Good work and keep it coming!

Defiantly will!(:

@ IGetHighOffLife
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of what you read! Please tell me what you think :]

I only read the first chapter, but oh god I love it! It is so interesting and different. And your writing voice is amazing. It definitely keeps me wanting more. It is just so perfectly written. I will be back later tonight to read more. This is just amazing!<3
I love the characters do far and I can not wait to get to know more about them and their pasts and where they are going. You are definitely a great author.
I do not really know what else to type, because you need 100 words right? I do not know what else to type so..

@ Brooki3
I can't even lie. I'm just as excited about Avery's side as you are. Seeing things from both perspectives is going to be really cool.

@ popular mechanics. I agree. I seriously am addicted to this story and I have a feeling it will only get better. SHe is becoming much braver and still confused as would be expected. Keep up with it though. Avery is by far my favorite character and I'm glad there's a spin off from his point of view. Subscribed to both this and that. ;)

@ Brooki3
Thank you! I tried to put a lot of build up on her development from being so timid to eventually becoming more independent, etc. She's definitely braver than many would give her credit for.

This story is amazing. I love how strong she is.

@ Cue_the_violins
oh my god, really? that's insane! i love the name thalia, i think it's so pretty.

I like Thalia. She has my name ;)

@ justsayyes
HOPEFULLY, i'll have one up tonight or tomorrow. busy busy week, but i'm still plugging along!

I love this!!! what a gem! last chapter was so sad. can't wait for more updates!

I'm proud you did too! Everything's left really subtle, not necessarily to trick readers but because Tali herself has no clue. But I'm glad you figured it out.

Yes, I was sad when Avery was mad at Tali. It took me a little while to figure out that Avery was the boy, but I am proud to say I put it together before you stated it lol

@ SadNight
Hahaha I thought you'd enjoy that! I think it did them justice.

I really like how you do the chapters with the broadcasts, it's like I'm one of the citizens. And I'm really happy Avery and Tali made up ^_^

Nooooo Avery! I hope they make up soon, I like them together. He's so older brother to her and helps her understand the outside world. And that was sweet of Alex to help her. Keep writing! Must know what happens haha

@ Sunshine Suicide
Tali and Avery will forever be cute. I'm hoping Alex will redeem himself in the coming chapters! Haha, you'll learn more about him.