When Night Breaks - Comments

@ discoveringclouds
Yes! I apologize for the delay in the updates! Lol. Another chapter coming very soon! Thank you for your comment!!

Hey!! You updated! These two are so cute but OMG I need to know. Will that person survive!?!

@ discoveringclouds
That could work though! Haha.
Hahaha!

Samantha and jay.. Maybe jay should wear sunglasses at night. But then he looks suspicious.. Hmmm.

Btw they should get married!! This last chapter just about is it with me! 24 years old and acting like a teenager. Gosh. Get married. Be a real man! Sheesh.

You'll never see Cadbury chocolate the same way ;)

Reminds me to write a mibba book review!

OMG yes you do! Look at the sample chapter: http://www.eighthscroll.com it's so epic! Also the rest of the book will have you laughing and or holding your breath with anticipation. I've never read a book like this in my life.
I guess good comes to those who wait, because I waited a year before I bought it. Anyways it's also on kindle! And very cheap, but so good!!

@ discoveringclouds
Oh I don't think I've heard of that! I have to look into it!
Thanks for your continued comments! Means a lot!

Oh my my my running away! This reminds me of a book I was just finishing off today. The Eighth Scroll, it has dramatic and exciting exits that set my heart rate pumping!!

I wonder what her friends and family will think we she vanishes!

@ discoveringclouds
Thanks so much for continuing to read! Means a lot! And your comment is very kind, thank you!
I will certainly give your story a read!

Btw this is getting pretty intense, I'm getting pulled right back into your story world. Also the way you write pulls me right back to where I left off, very flowy work you have here. Good job. (But seriously, there's still too much kissing!!)

It's nice that you brought up your faith. I like to hear the stories of the prophets too. It's funny though how we always equate our past with religion instead of our present as if.. We lost that sense of steadiness we had. The way jay just seems to barely grasp at his belief in God must be so relatable to people...

It's been a while since I read your story, I hope you're doing well. Also if you'd like to read my story surrendering that would be nice.

Here from comment swap.

Firstly I like the title that drew me in for some reason. I love love love the layout. I like the quote you used at the top, also the background is so elegant, but it's not bright and distracting like I find in numerous stories.

I don't know why, but when I read the prologue and you wrote about their relationship being driven by stubbornness, (I don't know how you worded it exactly) it just made me smile. I had this feeling that the story was going to develop into a really cute relationship. And I won't spoil it for anyone else by writing more on that point.

I love your style of writing, your paragraphs are to the point, yet wonderfully detailed and thought out. Your descriptions flow and there was never a point where I had to re-read something to understand, so for that I say well done!

@ Theo Rossi;
Thanks again so much!!

It's worth waiting for. It's so good! :)

@ Theo Rossi;
I've certainly got some good chapters coming! I hated I waited so long to update! Thanks for waiting and sticking it out! Love having you as a reader! :)

You're welcome:) I really can't wait for the next update.

@ Theo Rossi;
Hey thanks darlin!

I love the update. I love this story so much.

@ Artist Vs. Poet
Its okk :-) I would've read more but last night I gad a lot to do xxxx

@ TheShiningSoul
Thank you so much! I appreciate the comment!!