The Forbidden Fruit - Comments

@ KaeBug
I did try hinting that he was psychotic in the author's notes. Emphasising madly.

Did not expect George of all people to do something like that...

@ bxgurl95
Took me a while to think about it. I'm all about dramatic endings.

Holy shit I wasn't expecting that at all!

@ bxgurl95
Thank you :) I recommend At his mercy. Its finished. The others ain't that good. Thinking of doing them again. Like Encantando :) Oh ad my co-write falling for you is pretty good too :) thank you so much for reading though. I've got two chapters coming out actually. Working on the next one at this very second.

She's amused hit he picked up a knife ?! This girl
So I read this story in one sitting and I gotta say I was hooked. I believe I. One of your Author's notes you said you were trying out different styles? I haven't read any of your other things (which I'm definitely going to do now), but you have a great thing going here with the original fiction. (And toe author's notes ramblings are quite funny). This story is captivating my dear and I'm torn just reading it. Can't wait for the last chapter!

This should be interesting...
A drunk George, interesting.

@ January Rose
Lol thanks. Glad you liked it :)

I loved the wedding! So sweet.

@ ebony_goddess
Okay...

@ January Rose
Like I said, you readers are in for a big surprise :) you just wait.

Just read the last few chapters and chapter 28 almost made me cry! These few lines really got to me:
For my love for you is ever so deep Elise. If you were to ask me to cut of my arm for you, I would do so without hesitation. I would sail the seven seas. There is nothing I cannot do for you. So tell me Elise, what do you wish me to change about myself. I can become better. I shall become perfect for you Elise
How sweet is George!? I have been rooting for them since the beginning and will till the end. I just hope that Darius releases his hold on Elise and lets her live her life the way she wants it.

@ KaeBug
Thank you and will do

@ January Rose
Oh thanks :) I was thinking it was a bit of a boring chapter, because not much really happened. It was mostly informative.

I absolutely love this! The way it's written in 19th century is perfect! Update soon:

Really liked this chapter. You got to know more about Darius and his family. Strict Mother...

@ ebony_goddess
Yah, I really like George and Elise as a couple!
I feel really bad for Albert too, I just forget to mention him in my other comment!
Still feel so bad for George though...

@ January Rose
Lol you've been rooting for George and Elise from day one haven't you :) well, it really is affecting George. His just hurt by the whole thing and is trying to see how to deal with it. And a lot is going on, like sick Albert, so he can't really confront her about it at the moment. By the time he does so, he would have calmed down though.

Oh no! What George is thinking about his future wife...
I really hope he asks Elise what is going on and then Elise can explain it to him. That would suck if he let that memory get to him and then he blows up on Elise and Darius only to find out that Elise is Darius' mistress. Poor George. Poor Elise.

@ January Rose
I know, it is quite sad. I haven't decided who I want her to be with in the end as well. So..its kind of hard. I kind of want it to be George though. However, in the original story she was to end up with Darius so its gonna be a problem. I need to make my mind up soon.