The Forbidden Fruit - Comments

Oh... she has a really hard decision in front of her.
If I was her, I would chose to sleep with him and save my little sister since she is so young.
Please update really soon tomorrow! I'm dying to know what choice she makes!

@ ebony_goddess
I know and that is the saddest thing of all...

@ January Rose
Hmm...yeah. It's gonna be tough. Especially the fact that he literally holds her life in the palm of his hands.

I'm glad she chose not to sleep with him but now he is going to pressuring her more and more to have sex with him. Hopefully she stays strong and doesn't break under the pressure...

@ ebony_goddess
Okay, cool.

@ January Rose
I'm actually working on it :) I'm on a hype

Intense! So she either spends all her life trying to pay back a debt that she will have to pass onto her grandchildren or she sleep with her boss every night and get the debt over with.
That would be a hard decision, especially back in those days when there was You want to do what's right for your family but you also what to keep your innocence.
Update really soon!

@ January Rose
Actually updating in a few minutes. I already had the chapters ready. Just looking through them and making them perfect. I don't want to make the same mistake I did last time and thank you so much for the comment :)

This is really good! I like how it is set back in time and the main characters are poor.
I really wonder what the "master" is going to think of her...?
Update soon!

@ Crashing_Demon_666
Aww *wipes a tear*

@ ebony_goddess
Why wouldn't I be proud?You're amazing! And I'm glad I made you happy. :)

@ Crashing_Demon_666
I'm so happy you're proud :D makes me happy xx

I am so proud of you! I am definitely staying for more! :D Subscribing and recommending all the way!

@ BlackxMetalxAngel
Thank you so much :) I was really unsure about it.

Amazing. One prologue, and I am stalking your writing.
Very good.