May 5th, 2013 at 06:24am
Cool, can't wait!
The Forbidden Fruit - Comments
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@ ebony_goddess
Cool, can't wait! May 5th, 2013 at 02:36am -
@ January Rose
Lol yeah :) and I actually struggle to come up with names believe it or not. Working on the next update right now.May 5th, 2013 at 02:30am -
Love it!
I can see a lot off trouble for Elise in the near future and I hope none of it includes death!
I wonder what the history of Lord Haizen and Alejandro are. (Creative names by the way)
Update soon!
May 5th, 2013 at 02:27am -
@ ebony_goddess
Okay, thanks! May 3rd, 2013 at 12:50am -
@ January Rose
Oh yeah, I should do that. Might take a while though, but will definitely have one soon.May 2nd, 2013 at 11:54pm -
@ ebony_goddess
Interesting.
Update soon!
Oh, could you please add a character tab?May 2nd, 2013 at 11:48pm -
@ January Rose
He genuinely is a nice guy, just has a weird wayy of showing it reallyMay 2nd, 2013 at 11:38pm -
@ ebony_goddess
It's not?
Oh no...May 2nd, 2013 at 11:33pm -
@ January Rose
Oh....wellMay 2nd, 2013 at 11:20pm -
@ b0-n-Arr0w
I promise I won't. Not this time.May 2nd, 2013 at 11:20pm -
Suspenseful!
I really hope that the debt is a lie, because if it's not... that seriously would suck.May 2nd, 2013 at 11:16pm -
What ever you do dont stop writing this, because i really like it.May 2nd, 2013 at 11:16pm
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@ January Rose
Not sure if I'll update tonight though :(May 2nd, 2013 at 12:44am -
@ ebony_goddess
Sweet, can't wait! May 2nd, 2013 at 12:38am -
@ January Rose
His like the "villain" in my story lol. But yeah, his a bit of a prick is he not. I'm glad you liked it :) and yeah, working on an update.May 1st, 2013 at 11:39pm -
Oh man... I don't even know what to say. (But in good way)
I feel so bad for Elise, she is in such a horrid position. And I seriously hate Darius, he wins the award for being the jerkiest person on this world.
Update soon! May 1st, 2013 at 11:29pm -
@ ForeverARedHead
Thank you so much for the comment :)May 1st, 2013 at 10:49pm -
@ January Rose
LOL not to worry, no one is getting locked in the basement :) at the moment that is...messing no ones getting locked up anywhere.May 1st, 2013 at 10:49pm -
I think this story, it is very well done. A lot more depth and a lot more detailing and emotion. I like, continue, that was some cliffhanger!April 29th, 2013 at 03:34am
He really does own her and that sucks.
I wonder if Grace and her husband-to-be move. It would be hard (leaving your family and friends) but it may be worth it.