June 8th, 2007 at 12:01pm
I think I'm gonna love Matthew's Curse even more than I loved The Dance-floor. Seriously. It was an amazing, tense and intense start. Captured me from the very beginning. I love how you managed to portray Sean's inner struggle. And the weather basically reflected his mood, fears, whatnot... Then the sky cleared up and the tension somewhat dispersed, but it left him doubting himself.
I'm not making any sense, but I really loved the beginning of this series.
You made some typos, though. I'll hit myself with a shovel now.
You make so much sense and I like it (: Thank you for every single word you put in your post. See, now I'm not making any sense.
And, please, feel free to point out my typos, please. So I can correct them :D