Not That Far From A Star

So this is a class project that we had towards the end of the year that I had a little fun with. I got a good grade on it and my teacher said I went a little over board in what she was asking for so maybe that's a good thing? I didn't think it was all that good, but I would bu uber happy if you guys read it and gave me comments on future story's I may present. I mean, I haven't really been able to be on here much lately, but comment, rate, message me thought's, Ideas, and even hate mail. I don't really care. Thanksss! Hope you guys enjoy. :D