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You Know Something's Not Right When the Good Girl has been to Hell

Lizzy Alexander is your average good girl. She loves to read. Gets straight A's. Is extremely pretty. Everything daddy deariest could ever want.
The only thing is that her dad is best friend's with Satan...literally. This is one good girl who can actually saying she is going to hell, right after school.
Her father is immortal and her mother was mortal. Lizzy lives forever but has blood and a beating heart. She has no enemies...except one. Ash Diavolo.

Ash Diavolo (in Italian it translates to devil. His father thought it would be funny) is you average bad boy with a little hint of hell mixed in. He is so handsome people call him a sex god. He is a manwhore.
He will one day rule hell but in order to claim the throne he needs a wife and an heir.

These two hate eachother. Little did they both know that they were destined to be together.
And the devil has a few tricks up his sleeves.
  1. Chapter One: You're still a virgin? You're still a ***?
    They meet again...
  2. Chapter Two:Is this thing on?
    After dinner, Lizzy's dad suggests that Lizzy reads one of her poems to the guests since the performers cancelled.
  3. Chapter Three: My monthly gift has arrived, and so has my roommate.
    Will Liz is sitting suffering from cramps upon her sofa, eating french fries to ease her pain, a knock sounds on her door.
  4. Chapter Four:This is why you don't make a deal with the devil.
    It's Ash's first day of school!How will he take it?
  5. Chapter Five:This is what is mortal teenagers call Hell.
    Ash is enrolled to mortal school.
  6. Chapter Six: He will be the death of himself.
    Ash meet Lizzy's gay best friend, Xavi. He figures out just how protective of Lizzy Xavi really is.
  7. Chapter Seven:One promise that I am too scared to break.
    Hehe. Ash's point of view when Xavier comes out.
  8. Chapter Eight: The silent treatment (Until the puppy dog eyes make me cave)
    Ash and Xavi team up and beat up a guy who hit on Lizzy. They get Lizzy suspended.
  9. Chapter Nine: Ash meets my dream lover, well, ummm Ash.
    Ash meets Lizzy's dream lover whose name just happens to be Ash as well. But Lizzy's dream lover turns out to be someone Ash never expected.
  10. Chapter Ten: Over the hill and through the woods to the devil's house we go.
    After their...heated...little kiss Lizzy realizes that Ash needed to feed. Looks like they're going back to hell.
  11. Chapter Eleven: Rapunzel, Rapunzel, I'd help but I'm locked in here, too
    Satan is fed up with Ash and Lizzy fighting so he locks them in a tower in hell, for a month. Together.
  12. Chapter Twelve: This feels right
    Lizzy is locked in the same room with a VERY hungry Ash. Is she doomed to die or is a much more PLEASURABLE fate awaiting her?
  13. Chapter Thirteen: I finally know why amusement parks are so romantic.
    Lizzy and Ash, since they are now together, are released by Lucifer, and Ash takes Lizzy to an amusement park.
  14. Chapter Fourteen: There is so many ways people have proposed, but I love mine the best.
    Ash has another suprise for Lizzy, one that she would have never expected.
  15. Chapter Fifteen: What a day for a blood-red wedding.
    Wedding day! Need I say anything else?
  16. Chapter Sixteen: She will be Loved (Title credit to Maroon 5)
    Ash's POV on the wedding.
  17. Chapter Seventeen: Babies are born when Part A goes into Slot B
    The Wedding Night (I don't go too far. I'm sorry to disappoint.)
  18. Chapter Eighteen: The Prophecy
    The oracle says a prophecy over the infants after they are born.